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The Death Grip by Vyntresser The Death Grip by Vyntresser
I listened to a critique and made my laziness better :lol: Hope it looks, well.. better! :D

'nother submission to this contest! I have never submitted so many deviations to one contest :XD: This is like my 6th or 7th upload! LOL!

This picture I guess could be pretty self explanatory.

Sometimes bad influences or bad ideas tend to get a grip on us. Even when we know it's bad, we keep on holding on. You can't seem to let go, even though you know clearly that it's ruining your life and others lives around you. Living with this can be hard. I, myself, have some bad habits, and there are a few I really wish I could let go of =P

There are times where you think you'll slip off evil's back for good, but something happens where you're just shoved right back on the fast track of it.

No matter how hard it is to just let go of it, it seems you will sooner or later. Once you see that the evils are completely ruining your life or others around you, sometimes that's all it takes. But that's like, drastic evils xD bad habits I'm sure don't ruin your life.

I'd say my WORST habit is, needing change. I don't like immediate, drastic or bad change, but sometimes change is all I need. Whenever I get into a slump, or if I get into a fight with someone, I feel this HUGE OCD urge to rearrange my room, or straighten something. Sometimes it bothers people, cause I'm such a neat, rearranging freak LOL. If there's not enough change in my bedroom or house for a certain amount of weeks or months, I get very lazy. and when I get lazy, I GET LAZY lol! Like, hardcore failing grades sit and do nothing lazy lol. SO I always have to make sure something, at least SOMETHING is different in my room, or else I get very lazy. I guess that's sort of a bad habit of mine. I don't really have any other bad habits lol - I do have habits but I don't think any of them are bad haha

So yeah... Sometimes I wish I could be more satisfied with things around me, but I really do like change or spontaneous things. Like, if my friends were to burst into my room and yell 'drop everything you're doing, we're going on a road trip RIGHT NOW' I'd be in the car faster than you could ask me to pack LOL. I'm just weird like that. I love certain types of change =P

Okay, I'm done rambling. I think my boyfriend is scrambling to try to get first comment on this xD Hold in there Mikey! :rofl:

Enjoy guys :heart:~
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Critique by DaystarEclipse May 6, 2009, 6:09:46 AM
I love it. Just something quick first. Dogs have four toes. It's not a big deal, but I thought I'd mention it. The dew claw(is that how you spell it?) is a nice touch though. The shading is nice, but it would look better if it weren't so smooth on the mane and tail. When they're long hair like that, the shadows are going to be rearranged. The blood is also a little off. It feels like you just used the splatter paint tool. Try getting the same effect of varying opacity with with a normal brush or anything different(I can't say what because I pathetic when it comes to using a computer for stuff like this). Finally, the shoulder on his left is missing. It looks odd. Even seeing just the very tip would help. I like the wrinkles on the girls shirt, but Highlights seem a little unnatural. Tone them down a bit.
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Assassan Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
nice shading on wolf dowwgie
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks
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Assassan Featured By Owner May 10, 2009
np
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PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner May 8, 2009  Student Writer
:jawdrop:

This. Is. AWESOME!!!!!!! Kristi (do you mind if i call you Kristi? If you do i wont) this is sooo great!!!!!

And you are absolotly (i totally spelled that wrong but oh well) right about bad habits-i can think of a few. i have several bad habits myself, but i dont think theyre life ruining. maybe nail-ruining, but whatever :D
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Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah you can call me Kristi! :) That is my name LOL

Thanks so much! LOL and yeah, some of my little habits aren't life threatening either lol! :XD:
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PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner May 10, 2009  Student Writer
:) Im Chrissi. :D

No problem!! You're a really great artist. :lol:
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:excited: Nice to meet you!
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PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner May 15, 2009  Student Writer
:glomp:
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paintedbluerose Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Student Writer
Holy crap! It's awesome! Is that blood there? At the bottom of the paws? That's just... creepy, but awesome. :D
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!!
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:iconpaintedbluerose:
paintedbluerose Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Student Writer
You're welcome. :D
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:iconlolipopgi:
Lolipopgi Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*Gasps and dies*
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:giggle:
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:icondaystareclipse:
DaystarEclipse Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Student General Artist
Wow, it really looks amazing now! The fur is so great. And the blood looks a lot better!
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Wow thank you so much! I'm glad I listened to your critique, I'm really thankful!
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:icondaystareclipse:
DaystarEclipse Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Student General Artist
Your welcome. I'm glad I could help.
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OathKeeper5 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
This is sunning!:love:
I swear, if you worked in an animation studio, you would work with the people who does Avatar: the last airbender. Because your art style reminds me of it.^-^
Love that show!:boogie:
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
oh WOW! I'm so flattered, thank you so much!!
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OathKeeper5 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
no problem!:D
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LobaNegra94 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Student General Artist
Nicely done.
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Loba :)
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LobaNegra94 Featured By Owner May 30, 2009  Student General Artist
Your Welcome. :hug: ^^
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Avatarded99 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Student General Artist
woahhh lookieee the blood! :wow:
Awesome work hun, its amazing! :heart:
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
LOL! Thanks so much!
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Avatarded99 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Student General Artist
Np. :heart:
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iWaterbender Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
:) Very cool. I like that you used white as the color for the fur, not just because it makes the blood stand out, but that white is usually a color associated with inncence and peace, like evil will fool a person. :) Gosh, your wolves are so cool :D
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Wow thanks so much! I saw it that way too, I'm glad someone else does too! :excited:
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iWaterbender Featured By Owner May 16, 2009
:) That's creepy that we both have the same views, but flattering too, haha. Your welcome :glomp:
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Kolia91 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Nice! ^^ This is a sweet picture. I dont have anything to "critique" on it XD
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Nick ^^
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Kolia91 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
No prob... its the reason ur an amazing artist XD
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:iconice-or-fire:
ice-or-fire Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
looks great:D
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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ice-or-fire Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
welcome
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superaura Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Is... is blood? *almost faint* You scared your pet T_T wwooff, woof!!*doggy mode*

pd: the pose of the wolf is really good!
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Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
LOL! *pats head* I'm sorry lol! thank you!
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superaura Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
you´re welcome ^^
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onelilmonkey654 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're crazy! :O I'm only doing one piece, but it's going to be really high quality like my recent deviation.
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Oh okay lol ^^
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onelilmonkey654 Featured By Owner May 8, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa nice edit! :D
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconrintarin:
RinTarin Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is that blood on the doggie's paws? From the thumbnail it looked like rose petals, lol. Either and both make the image eye catching. Nicely done.

Also the change thing sounds interesting. ^^
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Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
LOL I shaded it up a little so it should look a little better :D Thanks so much hun!
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RinTarin Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool cool. I liked it regardless. ^^
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:iconvyntresser:
Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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10animallover10 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Great work Kristi! It's a beautifull piece. I love the poses and the characters and everything :D And as always your artist comment is very cool and deep^^
I too have bad habbits. I hate drasic and fast changes. But give me some time to freak out and after that I accept it :) And I also somtimes ramble too long about things I like^^ I faved this one^^
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Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks interesting! I'm like that with certain things =P Thanks so much hun!
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shinigami-no-negai Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Another ASTOUNDING entry!!! :clap: :clap: :clap: :hug:
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Vyntresser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Moony! :glomp:
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wolfgod21-90 Featured By Owner May 5, 2009   Traditional Artist
TINA!!!!!! so amazing ><
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